Monthly Archives: July 2011

If Jesus Drove a Motorhome

It’s the 24th of July weekend.  Growing up in Utah, that meant parades.  I’m going to celebrate the weekend with a little alt-country.  Here’s Jim White, “If Jesus Drove a Motorhome”.  Jim’s a southern gothic hipster, sort of like if … Continue reading

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Pacing

Pacing is the alternation of action/tension bits (scenes) and non-action/tension bits (sequels). Different stories and different audiences may require different kinds of pacing.  Some rules of thumb: 1. Alternate scene and sequel. 2. Successive scenes should have bigger action or … Continue reading

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The Lure of the Secret World

I think one of the things I find most attractive in any novel is the feeling that it is telling me secrets about the world I live in.  You see this simply and pretty clearly in a lot of middle … Continue reading

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Give Me Three Years

I’ll have fans like this.

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Jots and Tittles: A Funny Little Example

You have to be aware of the market you’re writing for, and think about it objectively.  Here’s a funny little example, from last week, in my own writing. I am working on a middle reader novel and the Story Monkeys … Continue reading

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One Hundred Thirty-Three Characters

Twitter is great because it forces you to write efficiently.  Epigrams and haikus only. Twitter stinks because it is full of spammers.

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Anarchy in the U.K.

I can laugh at this.  My son is a subject of Her Majesty.

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The Hobbit

I just finished (re-)reading The Hobbit, out loud to my kids (this is their second reading of it, and they know the Rankin/Bass film well).  We’ve been reading out of the big hardback illustrated by Alan Lee, which is just … Continue reading

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Women, Women

And a little Yossi Banay, everyone’s favorite Israeli chanteur.  Man, does this look dated or what?  I want those glasses.  So do you, admit it.

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Moon

In honor of Lavie Tidhar, whose The Bookman I have started reading this weekend, I’ll post a couple of Israeli songwriters.  Here’s Shlomo Artzi, with “Yareach”.  Monty, Avi — I expect you guys to pass this on and get me … Continue reading

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